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Nominated by:
iMahesh (talk) on 2024-04-30 15:10 (UTC) |
Scope:
SCI Yamuna (ship, 2012), front view and portside, (Mumbai) |
- Comment According to COM:VICR (6) a diagram of a process or an object, (like flight control surfaces) must be specified as indicated in this diagramy File:Aft (PSF).jpg, --Pierre André (talk) 21:17, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Pierre André Leclercq: done, please review again. --iMahesh (talk) 05:07, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment iMahesh Suggest "front view and portside" as sub-scope, --Pierre André (talk) 09:40, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Pierre André Leclercq: Done --iMahesh (talk) 09:48, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Perfect for me, best in scope --Pierre André (talk) 15:06, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose IMHO this is a credible VI nomination and agree in general with Pierre's comments. However, the scope, as written, still seems overly descriptive. The fact that this ship is in located in Mumbai is good information to be recorded in the ship description, but the city is not on display and is superfluous to the scope. Suggest a simpler, more focused scope such as:
'''|scope=[[:Category:SCI Yamuna (ship, 2012) | ''SCI Yamuna'' - IMO 9575618]] – port view''' with a scope link to the ship category, would work better here.
- The ship name and IMO # uniquely identify this ship matching what is shown on the bow. While the sub-scope could be "front port view", IMO the image appears to be more port side than front.
- The value statement becomes that this image represents is the best port view of this ship-by-name, irrespective of where it is docked. --GRDN711 (talk) 15:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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Review Page (edit) |
Nominated by:
Giles Laurent (talk) on 2024-05-05 11:09 (UTC) |
Scope:
Capra ibex (Alpine ibex), male walking, and Creux du Van with snow |
Comment I think "at Creux du Van with snow" is not necessary in scope. --Thi (talk) 13:08, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your comment. So you would suggest "Capra ibex (Alpine ibex), male walking, and Swiss Alps in background" instead of "Capra ibex (Alpine ibex), male walking, at Creux du Van with snow and Swiss Alps in background" ? The thing is that almost the whole background is the Creux du Van itself and that the Swiss Alps is only the small portion on the top right with the far away mountains. So I think it would be more relevant to remove the Swiss Alps instead of the Creux du Van don't you think ? I just edited it that way, tell me if it works for you. Giles Laurent (talk) 13:16, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- The Alpine ibex lives in the Alps of Europe, I don't think that any particular area is important to the scope but the mountain habitat is. The background is mostly unsharp and it is not important for the scope. I think that the scope should be more like a image search query (Capra ibex (Alpine ibex), male walking in the mountains) than a detailed description of the image. --Thi (talk) 15:39, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Here is the thing : the Creux du Van is not part of the Alps of Europe according to this map and as proven by this photograph, the Alpine ibex don't only lives in the Swiss alps. The Creux du Van is actually not that high in altitude, only 1440m in average. The Creux du Van background is immediately recognizable for any person that knows this place and this image illustrates well the male Alpine ibex that can be seen there (there is only one old male there according to my knowledge but many females) as almost all of the background is it. The place is very famous and 200'000 persons visit the Creux du Van every year with probably 80 to 90% in the summer and ibex are often seen there by people because they are a species that is not afraid of humans. So I think the picture illustrates well the male Alpine ibex that lives there for people that would do like a image search query of the ibex that lives there. Also, there is only a few days/weeks every year that you can have snow there as it is not very high in altitude and also because winters are becoming warmer and warmer lately. In the light of these elements, what do you suggest to use as scope, don't you think the new one would fit? Giles Laurent (talk) 15:56, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support The scope is good since Creux du Van is a well-known natural attraction, the picture illustrates the animal and the nature reservation area. --Thi (talk) 16:31, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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